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Monday, April 23, 2012

The Faceless Ones (Part One) Rated R

His body ripped apart, imploding from the inside out.  He never had a chance, they could not be stopped.  The military was doing everything they could but they could not stop them.  So far, two million people were dead and more were dying every day.  Their bodies would be torn apart or disintegrated and they would be reincarnated to serve the Faceless Ones. And this is a story on how they were stopped.
    The White Cleaver leaped over the heads of the 2 infected (the reincarnated people) and cut their heads off with one swipe of his scythe.  He landed and saw a cleaver battling 3 infected.  The white cleaver threw his scythe like a boomerang.  The cleavers are genetically enhanced military soldiers that have skills that no one can match.  The white cleaver is the leader of the cleavers, he has been more genetically enhanced than any of them and he is very hard to kill.  He was built to destroy the faceless ones, that is his everlasting goal.  The scythe slammed into the first infected giving the cleaver time to do a flip and get away from the infected.  The cleaver then slammed the but of his scythe into one of the infected heads and cut the other infected in half.  The White Cleaver called for his troops to regroup, there was no answer, then suddenly the ground erupted and a faceless on shot out.  The White cleaver unsheathed his bow and notched an arrow in it.  The Cleaver unsheathed his scythe and leaped at the faceless one at the same time the White Cleaver let his arrow fly.  The Faceless One shot out tendrils of darkness into the cleaver.  The Cleaver stopped mid jump and exploded, guts falling on the Faceless on and the White Cleaver.
    This did not stop the white cleaver who's arrow had penetrated the faceless one already, the Faceless One did not know this and the White Cleaver just turned and walked away, the Faceless One raised a hand but nothing happened.  The White Cleaver kept walking the suddenly Leapt up into the air, performed a backflip and landed on the Fac eless Ones head.  The White Cleaver took out a small dagger and plunged it into the Faceless Ones head.  The White Cleaver leaped off and began to run away from the Faceless One.  At first there was nothing then BOOM!!!!  The Faceless One exploded.  The White Cleaver just kept walking, he walked over the bodies of his comrades when suddenly one moved.  At first the White Cleaver took no notice of it, it was probably just a death twitch but then the Cleaver took off his mask, and the person under it was... A kid! He looked to be in his teens and he was bleeding all over his body, He started to fall but the White Cleaver grabbed him before he hit the ground.  
    When the White Cleaver got back to HQ, the medics took the boy to the infirmary right away.  He was suffering from internal bleeding and one of his lungs was punctured.  The White Cleaver almost never felt emotion, he was not supposed to, but today he felt one emotion, pity.
    Most of Africa has been taken over and destroyed by the faceless ones.  The ones that are fighting are no match for them, slowly, their defences are falling and their courage going with it, today, Cairo fell. Thousands massacred, guts litter the streets mixed in with rivers of blood. The few survivors huddle in small groups, there eyes wide, no signs of sanity left, they will be scarred for life.  The White Cleaver walked through all of this with his squad of cleavers looking for something that could destroy the faceless ones for good.  It is called the Scepter of the Ancients.  It is thought to be hidden somewhere in Cairo, the magic radiating off it is so powerful, the White Cleaver can feel it from miles away.  He feels it right now, along with the stench of dead bodies and rot.  An insane man jumps on a cleavers back, that was a huge mistake.  The cleaver punched backwards into the man's face making 5 of the man's teeth fall out.  The stunned crazie tried to punch back but the cleaver grabbed his fist and broke all of his knuckles at once.  The crazie screamed in pain and dropped off the Cleavers back.  The cleaver then did the only thing he could do, he drew his scythe and decapitated the Crazie, it was for the crazies own good.  The White Cleaver and his squad moved on without a backward glance.
     
    
  
            
       

2 comments:

  1. Hey guys, this is my first published horror story, it needs some editing, send me back some feedback in the comments, thanks.

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  2. You have a lot of good detail, but your paragraphs lack unity. It is a bit hard to follow everything that is going on. Break this up into shorter paragraphs.

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